- choose a story to tell to a friend, or just out loud to yourself. It might be a fairy story told to a child, an anecdote from work told to a partner, or a secret told to the mirror.
- Select drawing materials, based on your experiences of the course so far. Choose the scale and material substance of this drawing. You might like to explore materials borrowed from mapping diagrams, doodles or flowcharts, or you might like to dislocate the process from its usual materials and use something quite different. Remember make brief notes in your learning log about your choices.
- Tell the story and attempt to draw as you talk. Don’t worry about capturing all the detail; allow the natural ebb and flow of the language and images to operate together. For example, there is no need to complete a part of the drawing once the narrative has moved on- just leave it incomplete.
I have first created comic story on manila envelope with mix media ( collage, acrylic and markers) based on the lyrics of the song from the singer Bjork, called “Human Behaviour”. It took me time and effort to finish it . I did it slowly, worked on it for over a week and it was more an exercise for me to learn to take a step back, leave the work for a day or two and go back to take a look, continue, change or just finish it. This was not as proposed in the exercise: a natural flow, but I just felt like exploring something new.
Human Behaviour (1993) [user-generated content online] Creat. Bjorktv, 8th August 2010 at:
The story of how I received the news on my Dad’s death was exactly as proposed in the method for this exercise. I just followed the flow. No planning, not much thinking, just the main memories of a day.
Reflection on exercise 4.3 – drawing and thinking
For this exercise I have chosen Graphic recording method. I have done a couple of graphic recordings for meeting in the school I work at and I found in it the flow and visuals to tell a story the way I like to . With Bold lines and clear images, little details but only the essential information to engage the viewer. Black markers and tones of grey and a little red was the range to express my feelings in the right amount. I had sketched before but my final exercise is in A3 paper with better sequence of events. I didn’t worry much about proportion but to let it flow out of me, as I re told the story to myself out loud. Once again the only thing in my mind while doing Part four was the death of my dear Dad. The story goes through exactly the scenes I have in my mind: everything seemed to have happened in a split of second! The pain and lack of air I felt was exactly as described in my images.It was like I was bottled and couldn’t breath or hear anything. I had no chance to go back home due to financial and logistics . At the end of the day, I had to accept it, give him my best thoughts and love and it didn’t take long for me to feel that he was ok. I have the feeling that he is back to his roots in Japan, with our ancestors. I feel sad but I feel comforted by thinking about it this way.
Questions from module on exercise 4.3
- How do you feel about your drawing? I have been doing comics for fun since I was a little girl. I enjoy drawing stories, specially for children. For many years I wanted to be a children’s book illustrator. I have the ability to create characters and picture the place for them when I read a story. I never had the chance to do it professionally as it is a very competitive field and I live in a part of the world where limits me to find publishers or ways to get into this kind of job. My true answer is, YES, I enjoy drawing stories, but more about the images than words.
- What worked particularly well in your story? How I depict myself, my simple morning routine and the sudden change by a phone call.
- How might you extend these features? If I was to draw a whole comic, I would draw more panels with details about how was the day before, how long it was the next 24hours after the sad news. How I told my kids and how we participate through the funeral ceremony via Skype. I have loads of more images to depict how much happened inside me in about 48hours.
- How might you incorporate them in your future drawing? I have always done drawing with a quite extend level of details. It is my comfort zone in drawing. I want to be more expressive, a bit abstract. That is my challenge, I want to do less but with more intensity and it happens when I work more freely and lose details. I like the fact of shrink the whole stories and only a few images. That why the choice of Graphic recording.
- Can you see any benefit of varying the pace of your work to include more spontaneous lines and marks? Yes, if I don’t take much time and try to simplify it is when my best marks come out! Maybe not in this specific exercise, but drawing in general , I tend to like my sketches more than final pieces.
- When you look at your own sketchbooks, can you see a way to cut to the chase more effectively now? I am not sure yet. I struggle keeping up a sketch book, I like to just go for it but I understand the importance of giving my tries and possibilities before deciding for a final work. I realise that sometimes through many sketches things can be added or excluded and the change of perspective and ideas change.